Sights and Sounds of Bonfire Night

by angela on February 3, 2012

firework photo

 

 

 This bonfire night poem is a great example of alliteration poetry
and includes some personification, metaphors  and a simile.

 

Since Guy Fawkes’ time, our bonfire nights
Have been bewitched by sounds and sights.
They represent his punishment
For plotting against parliament.

The prancing, dancing flames of fire
Excitedly rise higher and higher,
Tripping, skipping in the air
Raining hot ash everywhere.
Flames.png
rocket.png The wailing, trailing rockets fly
Attention seeking in the sky
While shooting, scooting, left and right
Explosively display their might.
The whirling, twirling Catherine wheel
Then orbits with a piercing squeal,
Sprinkling twinkling stars around
Which fall like moon-dust on the ground.
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Then all at once, the silence falls
And once again the night-time calls
Normal life again resumes
The memory lingers, with the fumes.

This poem uses lots of figurative language to describe the sights and sounds of bonfire, as well as other poetic techniques like internal rhyming (Rhyming within a line).

 

It is great for teaching alliteration (where the same initial letter is repeated) as it has so many examples eg.Punishment for plotting against parliament, as well as assonance (where vowel sounds are repeated ) eg, shooting, skooting etc  (Click here to see the TEACHERS’ PAGES FOR MORE DETAILS ON ALLITERATION) and also includes a simile (ie Fall like moon dust on the ground)

 

Lastly, there is some personification, ie, when an object is referred to as if it is alive (eg “dancing flames of fire, excitedly rise higher” and rockets…”attention seeking in the sky”

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